Lol! This is very charming indeed. X3 I love the poses of the mice (so... adorable...), and the lighting is MARVELOUS! It adds this curiously theatric feel to a very amusing picture, which just gives me even more amused because it's just so damn silly, like an overdramatic comedy or something. X3;; At any rate, your oekaki continue to amaze me - those brushstrokes don't look like they're from oekaki at ALL... >_< (maybe that's just my ignorance, but still...)
I really like the idea, and the coloration, but the poses aren't as dynamic as they could be.-- they look just a little bit awkward to me. The light's perfect, the hues are rich and warm, and the concepts great though.... dont get me wrong!